Before and after writing (Endless Ocean)

Here are two photo's of a child's writing, a less able writer who has difficulty finding ideas. The first is inspired from a novel by Michael Morpurgo, the second inspired by the Wii game. There was a big difference in motivation which I think is down to the fact that the child was 'there' when the game was played, he could relate to it, and simply turning on the Wii cued him in!